Thursday, 8 June 2017

should fidget spinners be allowed in school

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I feel that it is a parents responsibility to decide if their child can have a phone or not, that responsibility should not fall to the school or the teacher.

Some people might argue that having phones in school could lead to more cyberbullying, on the other hand, at TPS we do Cybersmart which teaches us how to be responsible on the internet.


Title: _____should fidget spinners be allowed in school??
school.____________________________
Introduction:
I think that when you have a fidget spinner then it makes you distracted, its loud and you might not listen to the teacher.

First paragraph:

O
In my opinion i think that fidget spinners should not be allowed in school because it is a distraction when you are doing your work.
R
If you have a fidget spinner you can distract your friends because they will be looking at it instead of doing their work.
E
 for example my friend was playing with a fidget spinner and i asked if i could have a turn and then when we had to go home i didn't finish my work.
O
 i think that fidget spinners are bad to have when you are doing your work.

Second paragraph:

O
I think that fidget spinners are noisy.
R
If you have a fidget spinner and you are playing with you might drop it on the table and it will make lots of noise.
E
For example i was playing with my fidget spinner when we were doing the debate and i kept on dropping it on the table and it made lots of noise.
O
I think this is one reason fidget spinners should not be allowed in class and school.

Third paragraph:

O
Another reason fidget spinners should not be allowed in school because people won't listen to the teacher.
R
It is important to listen to the teacher because if you don't then she will take it of you and you might be dumb when you grow older.
E
For example yesterday when we were playing wink murder lopiseni was playing with his fidget spinner and Miss Ashley took the fidget spinner of him.
O
I think that it is important to listen to the teacher so that means we shouldn't have fidget spinners.

Conclusion:


Summarise the 3 ideas
You shouldn't have a fidget spinner because it distracts you, you don't listen to the teacher and they make noise.  

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