Friday, 29 June 2018

Narrative plan

Brainstorm of ideas:
Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, fire-fighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,
Car crash
A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see
injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts
Fire fighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
On the phone
Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.
Fire extinguisher, put saw dust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.

The crash!!
2 sentences
One day there was a little boy named Elijah.
Orientation 5-10 sentences
One day there was a little boy named Elijah.. Elijah was a 7 year old boy with brown eyes and had black hair. Elijah was at sylvia park with his mum and dad. After sylvia park they went home and chilled for a bit and watched movies then the parents fell asleep and then Elijah took the keys off of the hook in the kitchen and took off.
5-10 sentences
Elijah took his parent’s car and then he drove off to his mate’s house to pick him up. Elijah and his mate Noah went to the supermarket to buy some food for the journey. Noah got his allowance and he stole a little bit of money from his parents. As they were driving Elijah lost control of the car and he crashed and flipped the car over and a witness saw and quickly called the police and the ambulance.
5-10 sentences
The fire fighters came and they put out the fire and used the jaws of life to cut open the car and then grabbed Elijah and Noah.
Less than 5 sentences
Then they went home and they forgave their son for what he did. But he still ended up in hospital.

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