The partner yoga challenge wasn’t the first thing we did. The first thing we did was doing the roll,getting into partners, moving the furniture away so that they could get some more space. I wasn’t doing it because there were no more partners so Miss Ashley said that I could be the photographer. What I saw was that I started off easy and then started to get harder and harder.the more it got harder the less people that were went to do it.
Author: Syraiah-lee
Checked by: Hiria
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Surface features
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Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence
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no
Capital ‘I’
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Capital letters for names of places and people
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Full stops at the end of a sentence
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no
Speech marks when people are talking
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no
Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘
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no
Words are written in past tense
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Connectives - next, then, afterwards
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no
Interesting and difficult adjectives
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no
Deep features
Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how
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Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt
Not finish
Ideas/events in the right order
Not finish
3 paragraphs
Not finish
Metaphors and similes
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Onomatopoeia, alliteration and/or idiom
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Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex
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One thing (name) did well was…
One thing (name) need to work on is…
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