Monday, 24 October 2016

spelling test

we were practising our spelling words. we did essential spelling list 6.

Evidence of writing learning

This is evidence of my writing learning. My teachers gave me feedback on my work.

Wednesday, 12 October 2016

i bate my high score and it was 14.
i am getting better at my basic facts.

Tuesday, 11 October 2016

patterns in nature

making new friends.

" Ah i'm tired maybe i should just sit down for a little watermelon for lunch." said mana. After Mana had his watermelon he went strolling past the playground and past room 1,2,3 and 4.  The bell rang  for each and every person that goes to Mana’s school had to go to class and learn.

When it was lunch time he ate his lunch which was an order  he ate it so fast and ran as quick as a cheetah out of the class down the stairs and outside he went to go and make new friends. But the problem was that no one would be his friends and a wave of kids came following him down the stairs and outside. When he went outside he took a deep breath and filled his lungs with oxygen. So he went back to where he had his watermelon at morning tea and he sat down with a frown. The bell nearly rang in like five minutes.

After a little while another boy came over to Mana and asked him “ do you want to be my friend because i have been looking for a friend all day and i have been denied anyway hi my name is Mac what is your name.”? Said Mac. “ my name is Mana and i am the same i have been looking for friends all day too.” said Mana. “ i would like to be your friend.” said Mana. “It’s a miracle for us.” Mana and Mac said.